Winter Snow 2: Will you please cc?

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  • Winter Snow 2: Will you please cc?


Answer #1 | 21/12 2013 22:22
Nice constraints and well packed 5-7-5
Answer #2 | 22/12 2013 00:14
You've written a heart-warming, beautifully balanced Haiku. Bravo, CB.
Answer #3 | 22/12 2013 08:48
Carey Ball I read the poem, then the answers (usually do not do that) then answered here. I liked it insofar as completing a good 5-7-5. I thought line two is confusing, a juxtapose of snowflakes making a fireplace, but line 3's cutting verse is still a good answer. I sort of fall in-between the answers below, but still give you high marks, cause you are Mr. Haiku. Congrat

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