What do you think of my script?

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  • What do you think of my script?


Answer #1 | 22/12 2013 09:20
Good story line. I see what you're trying to do. But I would never open a series with this scene, it'd be a fantastic scene to appear about halfway through an episode. Still I like it.
Answer #2 | 22/12 2013 11:54
Before you try to write anything, you really have to learn basic spelling and punctuation. If people are expected to read this and then perform it, they have to be able to understand it.

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