What do you guys think of my poem?

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  • What do you guys think of my poem?


Answer #1 | 19/12 2013 23:22
Why would someone shoot you in the heart with an arrow, then pull out a gun and also shoot you in the brain.seems a bit redundant
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Answer #2 | 20/12 2013 03:00
I like it :), but I agree with some of the other people who answered maybe make it a bit longer, so that the meaning of the poem is more clear. Very interesting idea. I love the drama.
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Answer #3 | 19/12 2013 23:28
Lol, nice. I like ;) Would add more to it if you can. But overall, it's good.
Answer #4 | 20/12 2013 01:48
I like it it's quite deathly but good zzz
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Answer #5 | 20/12 2013 02:16
It's nice with having a deep meaning in it. I think you should add some more lines to make it great.

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