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This poem is written as a Ghazal I would like constructive criticism?

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  • This poem is written as a Ghazal I would like constructive criticism?


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Answer #1 | 15/05 2009 22:04
I love your poem, nice ideas are expressed very well
Answer #2 | 16/05 2009 06:37
Couplets, you chose 12 beats. Pretty. I like it. What sand does in the desert.
Answer #3 | 16/05 2009 08:56
I look in awe upon the wilderness of sand It is indeed awe inspiring, the nature and all it contains including sand. I like your poem a lot. I personally prefer line breaks when reading this form or any other form of poetry; it makes it easier to follow through independent and/or dependent ideas, etc. Good job. EDIT: Thanks Nancy. It's so much easier on the proverbial 'eye' of my mind. You are very gracious :)

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