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Please review my story!!?

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Answer #1 | 05/01 2014 13:00
I saw it. It needs a lot more editing. I suggest you buy a book on editing and a grammar guide. It's okay but looks like what it is. A story written by an inexperienced writer.It'll get better with time and effort and as you write more
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