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Answer #1 | 23/12 2013 04:29
OMG that's so good! If that was in a book store I'd buy it!!! Great job!
Answer #2 | 23/12 2013 04:33
W-O-W This is categoried by far proffesional writing, even if youre not certified. This is unbelievable, continue the story if you're writing it!!
Answer #3 | 23/12 2013 04:43
Very well done. I feel I am in the car with you, seeing everything you see. Good job! Keep writing.
Answer #4 | 23/12 2013 05:09
If it's for school work/wattpad or any online site it's fine, if you want to put this into a novel to go somewhere it's not. There was no hook, no interest, you could simplify this into one sentence and move onto something more interesting. Before seeking traditional publication you're going to need several more years of practice. A young teen wrote this and that is exactly how it looks, it doesn't look professional and please remember most of the site is teens who haven't learedt what good writing is yet. best of luck and merry Christmas.
Answer #5 | 23/12 2013 21:21
If this is your writing it is very good descriptive writing. The only thing I would suggest is deleting the car. You should do a course in Creative Writing. Well done.
Answer #6 | 23/12 2013 05:15
Great, but maybe get rid of "the car" in the first sentence. It is a little too solid of a thing for such a beautiful flowing work such as this.

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