Is this poem ok for my girlfriend?

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  • Is this poem ok for my girlfriend?


Answer #1 | 22/12 2013 17:28
When morning beams come shining through My thoughts are always about you Your eyes, your smile and loving gaze Keeps me missing you all the day And with each moment spent away I can't help but say: You were, you are, and always will be The perfect-ever girl for me
Answer #2 | 22/12 2013 18:12
Wonderful, she should love it. Short sweet and to the point!
Answer #3 | 22/12 2013 19:10
Countdown to realization. 54321. The best thing you can do is throw it out. Women love virility. Women seek out strength. Sadly, poets have neither. Good Luck :)
Answer #4 | 22/12 2013 21:13
Seems good. Keep it simple. Be careful with your imagery. Every man who has ever looked at a tree and thought it was pretty has fancied himself a poet.

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