Is this a good poem to tell someone you like them?

Try this one, I tried to keep the spirit the same as much as possible, you can change & modify as you desire. PS don't let Sabrina know you are sub-contracting the love poems, she might find it a bit creepy that some guy on the internet is writing the love poems for her. That you caught my attention it was no surprise Your lovely blonde hair and sparkling bright eyes I so want to meet you but I'm just too dang shy I don't have the nerve and I wind up walking by You're an angel in my eyes, I wish that you could see Sabrina there's no other, with whom I want to be I love your stunning figure, your perfect white smile Your personality, your great sense of style To be the man in your life I am the aspirer Just a happy birthday wish from your secret admirer