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Answer #1 | 05/01 2014 12:14
There are many ways you can improve this piece of work. For 14 and for Wattpad it's not as bad as some of the stuff I've been asked to read on there. I don't take any writer on Wattpad seriously, and they all seem to go around asking other people how to get better, rather than teaching themselves about writing. If you truly want to make this better you need to teach yourself how to notice mistakes: http://www.bristol.ac.uk/arts/exercises/grammar/grammar_tutorial/index.htm Emma Darwin's blog "This Itch of Writing" Google it. Read it. Learn it. http://www.nicolamorgan.com/publishing-advice-books/write-to-be-published/ - this book is mostly for editing and well worth the buy So that's my offer of help, now you have to go all the way and pull it off yourself.
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