Is my poem too long/too short/good/bad / BRILLIANT?

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  • Is my poem too long/too short/good/bad / BRILLIANT?


Answer #1 | 22/12 2013 17:51
TOO much detail. My only advice is to re-read for mistakes. I didn't really understand what the themes were, or any subtext.
Answer #2 | 22/12 2013 19:07
It's not to long / it's not to short It's not Good /or bad .. 'it could get ugly, When fishing
Answer #3 | 23/12 2013 12:37
You need to bone up on this ~ or it`s an, `off with the head!` scenario... running around like that is inelegant, unrefined. I trooooly reckon you ought to stay home and eat grouse, instead.
Answer #4 | 23/12 2013 17:17
Your rhyming is pure delight (Dorsel / Morsel is Priceless). I tried to be humane and tie them in a loose knot, but they kept squirming untied. ...I love this poem.

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