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Answer #1 | 28/12 2013 23:19
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Answer #2 | 28/12 2013 23:21
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Answer #3 | 28/12 2013 23:37
I like it, but I feel like it can be kinda predictable. For example, either he saves the world or doesn't. If you decide to keep this story you're going to add something else, a twist at the end, or different elements, like magic or something. I can see this maybe, but you're going to have to add a bit more and yes, it does seem kind of cliche. Good luck thought (:

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