How is this pretentious?

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  • How is this pretentious?


Answer #1 | 28/12 2013 22:12
I get the general jist of what it's saying ======================== Write in plain English what you understand to be "the jist" of what is being said about this fungus blotting out memory and perhaps it will sound less pretentious and we can figure out what it is exactly that is being said here, and maybe even that of which the 'animal' is so proud.
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Answer #2 | 29/12 2013 00:50
Good stuff. Keep it up.
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Answer #3 | 30/12 2013 04:58
Its unnecessary to use this sort of expression when explaining something. It makes perfect sense though .
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Answer #4 | 29/12 2013 08:19
It's not very well written. It sounds like a sentence fragment up to meiosis followed by a run on sentence. You should say organisms intertwining if you want to keep that wording. New sentence after means nothing. I'm glad you're happy with it, but what's the point of writing? Showing off to yourself or expressing something someone else can appreciate?

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