Does this rare anime pokemon fan fiction story stink?

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  • Does this rare anime pokemon fan fiction story stink?


Answer #1 | 23/12 2013 03:29
I think it's pretty good so far, but I strongly suggest you take it out of "script mode" and put it in paragraph form. You know, like the type you would see in a book. I've made this mistake before on before and someone reported it and it got taken down. I would hate to see your story taken down for such a reason. Otherwise this is a pretty good story! PS: If you need help editing your story I'd be happy to help.
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Answer #2 | 26/12 2013 11:40
Although i am not a big Pokemon fan i do know that it's suppose to be about capturing all of them and exploring the region, seeking for gym badges and becoming the Pokemon master. Needless to say that this had nothing to do with that, but i guess it wasn't so bad and can be displayed as a Special Pokemon episode. I would also like to point out that when Paul visited Maylene, it was unnecessary for her to make him go to sleep when she could have just beating him up to a pulp just like she did when he woke up. Despite all that i've said, the story was okay.
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