Care for a poem, what do you think?

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  • Care for a poem, what do you think?


Answer #1 | 10/05 2009 23:04
I will probably send to an ex.....
Answer #2 | 10/05 2009 23:31
Very nice poem here, Heaven Sent. It's got a haunting message in it throughout its entirety. I feel like this directed towards a specific individual, rather than having been written in a general sense. I actually really love these last lines: "My eye have opened, I feel invaded, My mind raided, by the beliefs that were painted." Taken in a general sense, this is (to me) the rude awakening of a person from a life of ignorance and bliss to the reality of our situation. Thus, the feeling of having been invaded. As always, thanks for sharing, peace.
Answer #3 | 10/05 2009 23:41
It's so sad, cuts so deep, you could follow my soul by the drops it bleeds. GOD! Do we ever move on in this life or is suffering designed to be eternal!?!
Answer #4 | 11/05 2009 00:23
really awsm!
Answer #5 | 12/05 2009 14:43
I like it I seemed to zoom right through it kind of like a chant... you got me going.. no not rejection, watch your reflection from it... no protection from flying projectron...
Answer #6 | 12/05 2009 12:47
really asesome

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