Can you give me some advice on this story idea please?

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  • Can you give me some advice on this story idea please?


Answer #1 | 05/01 2014 12:28
There should be a love story in there somewhere coz it makes things 10 times more interesting
Answer #2 | 05/01 2014 12:29
Been there, done that. It seems bland. Add some vegetables to the soup, and maybe it'll taste better. Good luck!
Answer #3 | 05/01 2014 12:30
Wow tht sounds like my u shld put sme romantic angle in it, not diverting frm d main plot...make one girl extremly beautiful nd one really intellectual...both lov each other...put sme humour... nd dere u go wd an awsm story...
Answer #4 | 05/01 2014 12:44
Good topic for a short story, bland topic for a novel. A novel needs more than just one turning-point event, it's many events shaping the story and the main character's life. If you want a short story that focuses in developing MaKenzie's character in about 8000 words I'd say go for it. If you want to go beyond that... you'll need to work a LOT.
Answer #5 | 05/01 2014 13:06
I think the story idea is a fine idea... not my cup of tea but a good cup none the less... the suggestion I will make involves plot variances.... OK there are a few books and movies like this but what they all seem to have in common is a decentralized focul point. IE Bridge to terebithia is similar to this you had 2 friends neighbors meeting then one being drawn into the others imagination. you had adventure and friendship then tragity... was the tradagy the main theme or the adventure? or there friendship?... there are many like this and if written well can be very outstanding stories.. My Girl is another movie example of this same plot.... but yes if you find somehting to write about while at the same time show them as friends and how it afffects the one left behind it can be great.

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