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Can someone tell me how i can make this poem better?

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Answer #1 | 02/01 2014 12:24
motherless but iam a mother fatherless but iam one homeless shelter i provide can fix all broken ,yes i can do it! Today i protect and respect i know values of lives, will dare to burrie my sorrows within my heart No sympathy i need for iam strong , look into my eyes! i can face the world . dare not u challeng my image, iam a mother of my lil cute age! Beautiful as before iam No wars or refugees can thrust me apart iam soul made from angels in Heaven!
Answer #2 | 02/01 2014 12:26
Very heartfelt, but it doesn't flow. Your focus though, is very powerful. Keep writing. Good luck

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