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Can I have opinions on this rap I wrote?

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Answer #1 | 23/12 2013 07:41
It's very "white"....
Answer #2 | 23/12 2013 07:47
I like it, sort of. I guess I didn't 'sing' it right in my head. But it sort of makes sense, not like other raps I have heard. Your grammar's pretty good, so you talk about real things rather than just things that rhyme. (Well, I'm not saying people with bad grammar aren't smart or anything, It's just that people with good grammar tend to think things through more thoroughly...) It's good. Ask again when it's finished, though :)
Answer #3 | 23/12 2013 08:43
It doesn't flow well at all!

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