TEN POINTS! Is my story good?

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Answer #1 | 20/12 2013 04:16
this would be one epic movie... gave me the chills just reading... woah..... 10 out of 10 man. i am being totally critical here, cuz this is just epic.. BUT i think it would be a little sad if it just ended there, like, create a conclusion, by maybe, having the final scene be, where after they both are hanged, the father one day steps in, months after the incident, into the barren house, and finds a picture lingering on the on the floor. he picks it up and turns it around. its a picture of carl and danielle before danielle's death, happily smiling together on a date, but where carl's face should be, its burned through. And VOILA, perfect horror movie endingggg!!! *squeals*
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