please correct my english, love letter :)?

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  • please correct my english, love letter :)?


Answer #1 | 19/12 2013 10:26
The last line is the best. Although, no offense, "Because your a great dad, the kids love you more than me" is a pretty bad line. Just replace it for something better.
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