please correct my english, love letter :)?

Answer this question

  • please correct my english, love letter :)?


Answer #1 | 19/12 2013 10:26
The last line is the best. Although, no offense, "Because your a great dad, the kids love you more than me" is a pretty bad line. Just replace it for something better.
Positive: 69 %

Possible answer

Please correct my pronunciation. Please don't take pictures here. ... Could you please tell me why you love her? ... Please send me a letter as soon as you ...
Read more
Positive: 69 %
... free lesson plans and can correct your essays, reports, ... The Web site just for English students November ... please email us and let us know ...
Read more
Positive: 64 %
How to End a Letter. ... When signing the letter, should I write my first name, ... Write a Love Letter. How to . Write a Cover Letter.
Read more
Positive: 50 %
Please correct them to me?, ... Is this letter is correct. If not please ... Because my english writing is very poor so please help me to correct this ...
Read more
Positive: 27 %

Show more results